@iloko I can really hear your efforts in enunciating dear. That's so great!
However, I agree with jkos. Your Tagalog still sounds foreign, but please don't lose hope! Tagalog sounds stronger than English, so I suggest you try to practice speaking each letter with more force, no slangs or airy sounds in between. For example, in English, "T" is pronounced with air coming out in between your teeth with your tongue touching your lower front teeth. In Tagalog, we pronounce "T" a bit harder, with almost no air coming out, pushing your upper teeth with your tongue. Also with letters "D" and "K", as much as possible, please prevent air to come out from your lips.
Please practice more and I'm sure you'll get better. You may find some helpful videos in YouTube and lessons here in this site
I hope this helps.